| This area is used to showcase a poem I recently wrote that I want to give a little special attention to. Maybe for critique, maybe for comments, maybe for the hell of it. Check it out, and visit the actual deviation to comment!  Remembering When I walk into my bedroom, sundrenched Monday afternoon, tears fill my eyes remembering when the pillow on the bed was you. I lie alone and awake, dark hot mid-Summer night, tears fill my eyes remembering when I slept as you held me so tight. I sing aloud and broken, tune of a song that we shared, tears fill my eyes remembering when you said the words and you cared. I bend to pick the razors back up, evening cloudy and grey, tears fill my eyes and I bleed into black remembering that snowy day. Gently you took me away from the pain so slowly you kissed it all gone, crying alone here I think of that time and softly I sing our old song. Thanks for reading!  Click the link to comment or fave this piece:[link] |
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Viva La GloriaNewest
The FloodIt's building up, crashing in, down, flooding, a thousand tiny drops of water, salty, shiny, churning into a vicious flood, bubbling up at my ankles and rising so slow, so slow so slow.The Flood
I didn't know, I didn't see it as it crept up, touched my calves, touched my knees, touched my thighs like a lover, caressed me and brought me down.
It's sliding, silky up my waist, around me around me making me sway and it will drown me drown me on it's way.
It's so slow, so slow so slow. I'
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Wish I Hadn'tWish I han't done it, pressed the button, called you for the first time in (now) just over eight days.Wish I Hadn't
I think that's a record, don't you?
I wish I hadn't done it, gotten my hopes up, thought of hearing your glorious voice pick up, talk to me for the first time in (now) just over eight days.
Can't believe it's been so long, can you?
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InstinctI knew it then, more instinct than anything that I had to kiss you.Instinct
Not wanted to, not needed to, simply had to and I felt it in my bones that if I didn't obey this powerful force, I could just collapse.
So against our decisions and our promises, I reached up.
And you met me with every bit as much force. And it rattled the Earth when our lips touched and never before or since has anything made me feel the way you made me feel that night.
A heart-jarring, pulse-p
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Dark Velvet HandsFor the first time in a week I dreamed of you last night.Dark Velvet Hands
We danced a slow and lovely dance, one familiar to lovers but foreign to the faint of heart. I saw your eyes shut tight against the waves of perfect, saw you push me onward and upward toward shining ecstasy the way you always loved to do. We danced so close, so soft.
I imagined your hands sliding down my hips, dark velvet hands that stripped away the scars and the fears and stood out so vividly on my white skin. I imagined your hair in your face, your te
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| Top 5 Songs Currently Get these songs guys, seriously! All are unique and inspired, and all will get you hooked on the first listen. Have a go! 1. Murder City by Green Day "Christian's crying in the bathroom, and I just wanna bum a cigarette..." Genre: Rock 2. Tell Mary by Meg & Dia "You're gonna leave her tonight, sat up with her eyes wide, you fell in love with the girl you knew, and come to say goodbye. You're gonna leave her tonight, under a cheap July sky..." Genre: Alternative/ Pop 3. When and If by Ari Hest "I may not see her ever again, but I'm gonna die trying." Genre: Folk 4. Congratulations by Blue October "I can't change this, I can never take this back but now I can't change your mind..." Genre: Rock. Alternative 5. Paper Thin Hymn by Anberlin "I thought you said forever, over and over, one sleepless night becomes bitter oblivion..." Genre: Alternative |
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Thanks so much.
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When the time comes, ill be right up there on the front lines, drawing in those weird dripping clocks!!
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Gloria, where are you Gloria?
You found a home in all your scars and ammunition...
-Green Day "¡Viva La Gloria!"
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When the time comes, ill be right up there on the front lines, drawing in those weird dripping clocks!!
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Gloria, where are you Gloria?
You found a home in all your scars and ammunition...
-Green Day "¡Viva La Gloria!"
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I love you!
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