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I Wrote It In Six Words

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The poet decided to be visible.
                                                             You two dance. I walk behind.
The hat brought us closer together.
                                                             Trying to die, I saved you.
Redefined. Tried to rewind. Didn't find.
                                                             Fell in love, broke my heart.
Please believe I always meant it.
                                                             She wrote it in six words.
We hurt each other, found love.
                                                             I thought I knew you better.
I felt like he took it.
                                                             Not me minus you, am I?
Juggler intentionally drops glass ink bottles.
                                                             I cried, I bled, only ink.
Need to write, don't trust hands.
                                                             The second chance wasn't worth it.
I watched it, you lived it.
                                                             I protected you, and vise-versa.
I'll always be half of whole.
                                                             Twice divied by two is me.
That kiss was us, we broke.
                                                             The scars are covered in ink.
Don't you dare hurt her again.
                                                             Don't give up because of that.
I could've stayed behind: I should've.
                                                             We are green and a third.
Love. Pain. Tears. Blood. Recovery. Repeat.
                                                             I can't feel it, it hurts.
You never say you love me.
                                                             I still cry because you're gone.
Family together: now where are you?
                                                             I still miss you. I shouldn't.
Loved writing, music. sometimes people.
                                                             I fell, you caught me. Why?
Liberal democrat grandaughter of religious republican.
                                                             I miss you always. Do you?
Seeing you lets me keep crying.
                                                             You are not allowed...I want.
You wait too long to jump.
                                                             Say it: I have to know.
What the fuck is wrong now?
                                                             Come back to me, unknown uncle.
We love you, please let us.
                                                             I'm still crying, wipe my tears.
Cried for her. You comforted me.
                                                             This clock never seemed so alive.
I still just miss my friend...
                                                             Hope gone, but we have bread!
Cutters, shutters, flutters, rutters: my life.
                                                             Now what are your six words?
My old English teacher gave me "Not Quite What I Was Planning" which is a book of one thousand six-or-less-word memoirs written by different people.
I thought I'd share my ideas/my six-word memoirs...these all happen to be six-words exactly...
Tell me which one(s) you like!

Feel free to use the idea...but credit this piece (with a link, if possible) please!!

:hug: Thanks!!
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miserabel's avatar
My favourites:
"Juggler intentionally drops glass ink bottles."
"Hope gone, but we have bread!"
:aww:

I love six word stories... wish I had that book :meow: